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Nuke irst-person pronouns

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Nick Mathewson 20 år sedan
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@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ whether connections relayed through your computer originated at your
 computer or not.
 computer or not.
 <li>You can also get stronger anonymity by configuring your Tor clients
 <li>You can also get stronger anonymity by configuring your Tor clients
 to use your Tor server for entry or for exit.
 to use your Tor server for entry or for exit.
-<li>You're helping me with development and scalability testing.
+<li>You're helping the Tor staff with development and scalability testing.
 <li>You're helping your fellow Internet users by providing a larger
 <li>You're helping your fellow Internet users by providing a larger
 network. Also, having servers in many different pieces of the Internet
 network. Also, having servers in many different pieces of the Internet
 gives users more robustness against curious telcos and brute force
 gives users more robustness against curious telcos and brute force
@@ -239,7 +239,8 @@ having even low-bandwidth servers is useful too.</li>
 
 
 <p>To set up a Tor server, do the following steps after installing Tor.
 <p>To set up a Tor server, do the following steps after installing Tor.
 (These instructions are Unix-centric; if you're excited about working
 (These instructions are Unix-centric; if you're excited about working
-with us to get a Tor server working on Windows, let us know and we'll
+with the Tor developers to get a Tor server working on Windows, let us know
+and we'll
 work with you to fix whatever bugs come up.)
 work with you to fix whatever bugs come up.)
 </p>
 </p>
 
 
@@ -287,7 +288,7 @@ If you choose a particularly open exit policy, you might want to make
 sure your upstream or ISP is ok with that choice.
 sure your upstream or ISP is ok with that choice.
 <li>3. You may find the initscripts in contrib/tor.sh or
 <li>3. You may find the initscripts in contrib/tor.sh or
 contrib/torctl useful if you want to set up Tor to start at boot. Let
 contrib/torctl useful if you want to set up Tor to start at boot. Let
-us know which script you find more useful.
+the Tor developers know which script you find more useful.
 <li>4. Consider setting your hostname to 'anonymous' or
 <li>4. Consider setting your hostname to 'anonymous' or
 'proxy' or 'tor-proxy' if you can, so when other people see the address
 'proxy' or 'tor-proxy' if you can, so when other people see the address
 in their web logs or whatever, they will more quickly understand what's
 in their web logs or whatever, they will more quickly understand what's