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Fix various grammar/style/type issues in 0.4.2.1-alpha changelog

Fixes by seborn.
Nick Mathewson 4 years ago
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@@ -32,14 +32,14 @@ Changes in version 0.4.2.1-alpha - 2019-09-??
 
 
   o Minor features (best practices tracker):
   o Minor features (best practices tracker):
     - Our best-practices tracker now integrates with our include-checker
     - Our best-practices tracker now integrates with our include-checker
-      tool to keep track of how many layering violations that we have
-      not yet fixed. We hope to reduce this number over time to improve
-      Tor's modularity. Closes ticket 31176.
+      tool to keep track of how many layering violations we have not yet
+      fixed. We hope to reduce this number over time to improve Tor's
+      modularity. Closes ticket 31176.
     - Add a TOR_PRACTRACKER_OPTIONS variable for passing arguments to
     - Add a TOR_PRACTRACKER_OPTIONS variable for passing arguments to
       practracker from the environment. We may want this for continuous
       practracker from the environment. We may want this for continuous
       integration. Closes ticket 31309.
       integration. Closes ticket 31309.
     - Give a warning rather than an error when a practracker exception
     - Give a warning rather than an error when a practracker exception
-      is violated by a small amount; add a --list-overbroad option to
+      is violated by a small amount, add a --list-overbroad option to
       practracker that lists exceptions that are stricter than they need
       practracker that lists exceptions that are stricter than they need
       to be, and provide an environment variable for disabling
       to be, and provide an environment variable for disabling
       practracker. Closes ticket 30752.
       practracker. Closes ticket 30752.
@@ -112,13 +112,13 @@ Changes in version 0.4.2.1-alpha - 2019-09-??
       routerinfos, routerstatuses, and nodes. Closes ticket 21003.
       routerinfos, routerstatuses, and nodes. Closes ticket 21003.
 
 
   o Minor features (onion service v3):
   o Minor features (onion service v3):
-    - Do not allow single hop client to fetch or post an HS descriptor
+    - Do not allow single hop clients to fetch or post an HS descriptor
       from an HSDir. Closes ticket 24964.
       from an HSDir. Closes ticket 24964.
 
 
   o Minor features (onion service):
   o Minor features (onion service):
     - Disallow single-hop clients at the introduction point. We've
     - Disallow single-hop clients at the introduction point. We've
       removed Tor2web support a while back and single-hop rendezvous
       removed Tor2web support a while back and single-hop rendezvous
-      ttempts are blocked at the relays. This change should remove load
+      attempts are blocked at the relays. This change should remove load
       off the network from spammy clients. Close ticket 24963.
       off the network from spammy clients. Close ticket 24963.
 
 
   o Minor features (stem tests):
   o Minor features (stem tests):
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ Changes in version 0.4.2.1-alpha - 2019-09-??
       31657; bugfix on 0.3.3.1-alpha.
       31657; bugfix on 0.3.3.1-alpha.
 
 
   o Minor bugfixes (ipv6):
   o Minor bugfixes (ipv6):
-    - We check for private IPv6 address alongside their IPv4 equivalents
+    - Check for private IPv6 addresses alongside their IPv4 equivalents
       when authorities check descriptors. Previously, we only checked
       when authorities check descriptors. Previously, we only checked
       for private IPv4 addresses. Fixes bug 31088; bugfix on
       for private IPv4 addresses. Fixes bug 31088; bugfix on
       0.2.3.21-rc. Patch by Neel Chauhan.
       0.2.3.21-rc. Patch by Neel Chauhan.
@@ -266,8 +266,8 @@ Changes in version 0.4.2.1-alpha - 2019-09-??
   o Minor bugfixes (onion service v3):
   o Minor bugfixes (onion service v3):
     - When purging the client descriptor cache, close any introduction
     - When purging the client descriptor cache, close any introduction
       point circuits associated with purged cache entries. This avoids
       point circuits associated with purged cache entries. This avoids
-      picking those circuits later when connecting to them later. Fixes
-      bug 30921; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
+      picking those circuits later when connecting to the same
+      introduction points. Fixes bug 30921; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
 
   o Minor bugfixes (onion services):
   o Minor bugfixes (onion services):
     - In the hs_ident_circuit_t data structure, remove the unused field
     - In the hs_ident_circuit_t data structure, remove the unused field
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ Changes in version 0.4.2.1-alpha - 2019-09-??
       more general tool. Now typed structure members are accessible via
       more general tool. Now typed structure members are accessible via
       an abstract type. Implements ticket 30914.
       an abstract type. Implements ticket 30914.
     - Move our backend logic for working with configuration and state
     - Move our backend logic for working with configuration and state
-      files into a lower-level library, since in no longer depends on
+      files into a lower-level library, since it no longer depends on
       any tor-specific functionality. Closes ticket 31626.
       any tor-specific functionality. Closes ticket 31626.
     - Numerous simplifications in configuration-handling logic: remove
     - Numerous simplifications in configuration-handling logic: remove
       duplicated macro definitions, replace magical names with flags,
       duplicated macro definitions, replace magical names with flags,