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minor cleanups to the dir-spec

svn:r5618
Roger Dingledine 20 年之前
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      doc/dir-spec.txt

+ 8 - 8
doc/dir-spec.txt

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ $Id$
    load on the directory authorities.  They announce this in their
    load on the directory authorities.  They announce this in their
    descriptors.
    descriptors.
 
 
-   Each directory authorities periodically generates and signs a compact
+   Each directory authority periodically generates and signs a compact
    "network status" document that lists that authority's view of the current
    "network status" document that lists that authority's view of the current
    descriptors and status for known routers, but which does not include the
    descriptors and status for known routers, but which does not include the
    descriptors themselves.
    descriptors themselves.
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ $Id$
    entries, and a signature, in that order.
    entries, and a signature, in that order.
 
 
    We use the same meta-format as used for directories and router descriptors
    We use the same meta-format as used for directories and router descriptors
-   in "tor-spec.txt".  Impkementations Implementations MAY insert blank lines
+   in "tor-spec.txt".  Implementations MAY insert blank lines
    for clarity between sections; these blank lines are ignored.
    for clarity between sections; these blank lines are ignored.
    Implementations MUST NOT depend on blank lines in any particular location.
    Implementations MUST NOT depend on blank lines in any particular location.
 
 
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ $Id$
 
 
    For time-sensitive information, Tor implementations focus on "recent"
    For time-sensitive information, Tor implementations focus on "recent"
    network-status documents.  A network status is "recent" if it is live, and
    network-status documents.  A network status is "recent" if it is live, and
-   if it was published in the last 60 minutes.  If there are fewer than fewer
+   if it was published in the last 60 minutes.  If there are fewer
    than 3 such documents, the most recently published 3 are "recent."  If
    than 3 such documents, the most recently published 3 are "recent."  If
    there are fewer than 3 in all, all are "recent.")
    there are fewer than 3 in all, all are "recent.")
 
 
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ $Id$
    network status documents.  Clients SHOULD NOT use unlisted servers.
    network status documents.  Clients SHOULD NOT use unlisted servers.
 
 
    A server is "valid" if it is listed as valid by more than half of the live
    A server is "valid" if it is listed as valid by more than half of the live
-   network-status documents.  Clients SHOULD NOT non-valid servers unless
+   network-status documents.  Clients SHOULD NOT use non-valid servers unless
    specifically configured to do so.
    specifically configured to do so.
 
 
    A server is "running" if it is listed as running by more than half of the
    A server is "running" if it is listed as running by more than half of the
@@ -463,14 +463,14 @@ $Id$
    identities, some directory servers bind names to IDs.  Clients handle
    identities, some directory servers bind names to IDs.  Clients handle
    names in two ways:
    names in two ways:
 
 
-   When a client encountering a name it has not mapped before:
+   When a client encounters a name it has not mapped before:
 
 
-      If all the live "Naming" networks-status documents the client has
-      receive that the name binds to some identity ID, and the client has at
+      If all the live "Naming" network-status documents the client has
+      claim that the name binds to some identity ID, and the client has at
       least three live network-status documents, the client maps the name to
       least three live network-status documents, the client maps the name to
       ID.
       ID.
 
 
-   If a client is encountering a name it has mapped before:
+   If a client encounters a name it has mapped before:
 
 
       It uses the last-mapped identity value, unless all of the "Naming"
       It uses the last-mapped identity value, unless all of the "Naming"
       network status documents that list the name bind it to some other
       network status documents that list the name bind it to some other