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a few other cleanups

svn:r14622
Roger Dingledine 16 years ago
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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ They are marked with FIXME.
 
 
 <p>Most likely you are accessing this website because you had some issue with
 <p>Most likely you are accessing this website because you had some issue with
 the traffic coming from this IP. This router is part of the <a
 the traffic coming from this IP. This router is part of the <a
-href="https://www.torproject.org/">Tor Anonymous Network</a>, which is
+href="https://www.torproject.org/">Tor Anonymity Network</a>, which is
 dedicated to providing people with anonymity who need it most: average
 dedicated to providing people with anonymity who need it most: average
 computer users. This router IP should be generating no other traffic, unless
 computer users. This router IP should be generating no other traffic, unless
 it has been compromised.
 it has been compromised.
@@ -106,16 +106,17 @@ That being said, if you still have a complaint about the router,  you may
 email the <a href="mailto:FIXME_YOUR_EMAIL_ADDRESS">maintainer</a>. If
 email the <a href="mailto:FIXME_YOUR_EMAIL_ADDRESS">maintainer</a>. If
 complaints are related to a particular service that is being abused, I will
 complaints are related to a particular service that is being abused, I will
 consider removing that service from my exit policy, which would prevent my
 consider removing that service from my exit policy, which would prevent my
-router from allowing that traffic to exit through it. I can only do this on a
-IP+destination port basis, however. Common P2P and IRC ports are
+router from allowing that traffic to exit through it. I can only do this on an
+IP+destination port basis, however. Common P2P ports are
 already blocked.
 already blocked.
 
 
-<p>You also have the option of blocking this IP and others on the Tor network
-if you so desire. The Tor project provides a <a
+<p>You also have the option of blocking this IP address and others on
+the Tor network if you so desire. The Tor project provides a <a
 href="https://www.torproject.org/cvs/tor/contrib/exitlist">python script</a> to
 href="https://www.torproject.org/cvs/tor/contrib/exitlist">python script</a> to
 extract all IP addresses of Tor exit nodes, and an official <a
 extract all IP addresses of Tor exit nodes, and an official <a
 href="http://exitlist.torproject.org/">DNSRBL</a> is also available to
 href="http://exitlist.torproject.org/">DNSRBL</a> is also available to
-determine if a given IP is actually a Tor exit server. Please be considerate
+determine if a given IP address is actually a Tor exit server. Please
+be considerate
 when using these options. It would be unfortunate to deny all Tor users access
 when using these options. It would be unfortunate to deny all Tor users access
 to your site indefinitely simply because of a few bad apples.
 to your site indefinitely simply because of a few bad apples.