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Roger Dingledine 19 lat temu
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doc/tor-doc-osx.html

@@ -217,8 +217,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>

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doc/tor-doc-server.html

@@ -42,6 +42,7 @@
 <h1>Configuring a <a href="http://tor.eff.org/">Tor</a> server</h1>
 <br />
 
+<p>
 The Tor network relies on volunteers to donate bandwidth. The more
 people who run servers, the faster the Tor network will be. If you have
 at least 20 kilobytes/s each way, please help out Tor by configuring your
@@ -52,8 +53,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Setting up a Tor server is easy and convenient:
 <ul>

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doc/tor-doc-unix.html

@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>

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doc/tor-doc-win32.html

@@ -268,8 +268,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>