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fix sentence, fix html

svn:r4810
Roger Dingledine 19 years ago
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      doc/tor-doc-osx.html
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      doc/tor-doc-server.html
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      doc/tor-doc-win32.html

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doc/tor-doc-osx.html

@@ -217,8 +217,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>
 guide.</p>

+ 3 - 2
doc/tor-doc-server.html

@@ -42,6 +42,7 @@
 <h1>Configuring a <a href="http://tor.eff.org/">Tor</a> server</h1>
 <h1>Configuring a <a href="http://tor.eff.org/">Tor</a> server</h1>
 <br />
 <br />
 
 
+<p>
 The Tor network relies on volunteers to donate bandwidth. The more
 The Tor network relies on volunteers to donate bandwidth. The more
 people who run servers, the faster the Tor network will be. If you have
 people who run servers, the faster the Tor network will be. If you have
 at least 20 kilobytes/s each way, please help out Tor by configuring your
 at least 20 kilobytes/s each way, please help out Tor by configuring your
@@ -52,8 +53,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 
 <p>Setting up a Tor server is easy and convenient:
 <p>Setting up a Tor server is easy and convenient:
 <ul>
 <ul>

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doc/tor-doc-unix.html

@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>
 guide.</p>

+ 2 - 2
doc/tor-doc-win32.html

@@ -268,8 +268,8 @@ IP addresses.</p>
 
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>
 guide.</p>